It was a great story and I love the style a lot!It's a fair comment to want the names to appear where the character is when they talk.
I want to read the other one by the same person to see what's different.
Other styles of visual novels from this website:
This one has a very game-8bit style
very anime girl. transparent text box
interesting text layout, but it is just a photo bash background
super cute but kinda busy
cool style
sooo cute and different take on layout
cool textured background but kinda busy with characters
interesting the character head is at the side when they're talking. I think it might be unnecessary.Skullgirls Game story mode:
